I really like the way you used interesting words to write your moment in time but t's really hard to see the words cause it's the same colour as the fire.
WOW!!!! what great adjectives to describe the nouns . The camp fire you were talking about reminds me of a time we went to camp and the ashes were burning hot like mercury. I felt anxious and afraid. How does the warm breeze felt like?
WOW!!!! what great adjectives to describe the nouns. The camp fire you were talking about reminds me of a time we went to the camp and the ashes were burning hot like mercury. I felt anxious and afraid. How would the warm breeze feel like?
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ReplyDeleteI really like the way you used interesting words to write your moment in time but t's really hard to see the words cause it's the same colour as the fire.
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ReplyDeletehey,rachel here from w.p.s i really like the way you used interesting words to write your story!.
ReplyDeleteHi Lupe its lizzy, I really liked how you described your camp fire description. You used wow words and also good describing words.
ReplyDeleteWow Lupe nice adjectives and good words and underlines
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!! what great adjectives to describe the nouns . The camp fire you were talking about reminds me of a time we went to camp and the ashes were burning hot like mercury. I felt anxious and afraid. How does the warm breeze felt like?
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!! what great adjectives to describe the nouns. The camp fire you were talking about reminds me of a time we went to the camp and the ashes were burning hot like mercury. I felt anxious and afraid. How would the warm breeze feel like?
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