I am a Year 8 student at Wesley Intermediate School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Power Hive 08 and my teacher is Mr Vermeulen.
Great work Lupe! I really like how u described all those seasons but winter.. The last line has six syllables but good work!
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dear lupe your work is outstanding about seasons but there is one thing you need to add is a full stop before you put a capital thankyou sincerely Amanda
Hi lupe it is Rosamund from may road school and thank you for teaching me how to play 4 seasons i have so much fun play 4 seasons
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Great work Lupe! I really like how u described all those seasons but winter.. The last line has six syllables but good work!
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ReplyDeletedear lupe your work is outstanding about seasons but there is one thing you need to add is a full stop before you put a capital thankyou sincerely Amanda
ReplyDeleteHi lupe it is Rosamund from may road school and thank you for teaching me how to play 4 seasons i have so much fun play 4 seasons
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